Talking about 3D Animations (Research Project)

Talking about 3D Animations... - kewego
I talked about my research project on class about Blender and 3D Animations...

What's about mistakes?

I used a lot the connections like "aaaa, aaaaaand..." and I think that makes a bored speech. It's one of my worst mistakes. In other hand, the visual part was very well-made because I saw all the faces watching attentive the screen and also mine. But I used some words that I didn't think so much, like "The flying camera", I don't understand why I used this word because in catalan is like in english "The bird's eye view...

Also the sound was so much loud!! I didn't take care of it... 

There are som mistakes which can decrease the mark...